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what should I name this aa

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I hate this aa
The fire is bad

edit 10:16- My liked this one and said she wants to print it out and hang it on the wall aa 
edit 10:26- please help me, I want to improve my shitty art 
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This drawing is very beautiful, from the lighting to the choice of colour, but this is what I chose to criticise an this is my first critique so I am very sorry.

First of all, I noticed how the head is not in a round, circle shape but in more of a squashed circle, try to improve it by first sketching out a circle, ad using that circle as a base for the head, I hope you could understand what I just blurted out XD

Secondly, I noticed that you forgot the eyebrows. As you might know, the eyes are the window to the should, but the brows are the frames to the window. So without eyebrows, the drawing looks fine, but the eyebrows would really improve it.

Thirdly, I am looking at a weird arm. the arm has to start off thick and become thinned as it goes, but in the drawing you made the arm is think in the middle, and then thin on the start. Knowing the basics of the body is pretty important.

Finally, (sorry if this is getting offensive or annoying) the hair is one of the only things that is not lighted by the fire's yellow tint and instead it just sparkles all the way. It looks very beautiful, but it stands out way too much, and same with the eyes. If you decide to put lighting onto the object, I support! That is a great idea, but be mindful that it means you have to shade and put the lighting onto every single part of the object and not leave out anything.

Overall, I believe your drawing is really nice, but these minor improvements may made it much better. Hope you liked my critique and it really helps you.